• NTB/LNH: Classic LNH Adventures #234: JONG #69 'An Elsewhirl!' (1/2)

    From Arthur Spitzer@21:1/5 to All on Sun Feb 27 21:12:01 2022
    You can sift through the racc list archive https://lists.eyrie.org/pipermail/racc/
    or you can try google groups racc for this issue of JONG.

    As we get closer and closer to 'Just Another Multi-Writer Cascade That Will Probably Never Have an Ending' I thought that before started posting those issues -- shouldn't I post 'JONG #69' written by me (Arthur Spitzer) so that you dear reader can properly understand where the character Non-Judgmental Agnostic (daughter of Self-Righteous Preacher) came from although now thinking about it a bit I guess calling her the daughter of Self-Righteous Preacher
    is probably all you really need to know about her. And will you understand
    any of this issue of JONG if you haven't read like the five or six issues before this one? Probably not... oh well... guess you'll just have to wait till next week for the actual start of 'Just Another Multi-Writer Cascade That Will Probably Never Have an Ending'



    But for now...



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    ADVENTURES #234


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    JONG #69
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    From: Arthur Spitzer arspitzer at earthlink.net
    Date: Sun Dec 22 13:14:43 PST 2013

    20 years ago I posted my first LNH story. JONG #1.

    And now 20 years later...


    <<Warning: Horrible, horrible, horrible stuff that no Man, Woman, or
    Child should ever be exposed to lies beneath these words. You've been warned!>>





    "This is an ELSEWHIRL

    (which may never happen, but okay.. most definitely won't)

    about something that resembled a man who came from the gutter and did
    whatever he felt like.

    "It tells of his last one night stand, when the not so great battles
    were over and the great deus ex machinas long since performed;
    of how his enemies kind of forgot about him and went on with their lives
    and of that final war in the cholesterol entrenched fastfood wastes
    beneath Moono's Taco Liquor Rama; of the women he loved and the
    illegitimate children he left them; of how he broke his most sacred oath
    (and then tried to superglue it together again), and how finally all the
    things he had were taken from him save one (but it's not like he hadn't
    stolen all that stuff in the first place).

    "It ends with the fourth wall biting the dust.

    (or possibly none of the above will actually happen and the writer will
    write whatever he feels like.)

    "It begins in the loud vicious urban decay, one hellish afternoon in
    the miserable dystopian future. In this damned city, people still
    sometimes glance down uneasily at the sidewalks, glimpsing a distant
    speck in the gutter...but no; it's only a mime, only a politician! The Slobbering Grue! went MIA ten years ago... Thank God!


    "This is an ELSEWHIRL...


    "Aren't they all?"
    (Well except Dvandom Force and.. umm nevermind)



    with deepest Apologies to Alan Moore...





    LAST ISSUE!!!!!


    \-__ ___Guest Starring___-//
    / // ___________
    / // / // /\ /// /---\\ ///// | |
    / // / / // / \/// //_<-\ \#69\ |Approved |
    \___// /___// /_/\_// \____// \\\\\ |by no one|
    A whole lot of characters! |Actually |
    -----------

    (The comic approved by one out of nine dentists. That the dentist was
    later found brain dead in an alley way is purely coincidental.)

    Editor's Note: Editor's Note Noted.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    The Future! --
    Looniverse Classic! --
    Net.ropolis, Loonited States! --
    The Lawn of the Moono's Liquor World LNHHQ! --


    "...And Stay Out!!!!" said a grizzled looking
    You're-Not-Hitting-Me-Hard-Enough Lad. An eye patch dangled over his
    left eye as he kicked a raggedy homeless man out of the LNH's Headquarters.

    "No! No! Please! You've got to listen to me!" begged the homeless
    looking man. Underneath the shabby coat he was wearing there seemed to
    be something that looked a bit like a superhero costume. A faded black
    and blue costume with a boot imprint on it. "I'm LNH! But I'm from
    another alternate Looniverse!! I was a leader for this LNH (well at
    least until I got kicked out of the leadership position)! But
    regardless, I came here to warn you! Warn this Looniverse!! It's
    coming!! It laid waste to my entire Looniverse! Like it laid waste to thousands of other Looniverses! And now it's coming here!! You've got
    to believe me!! You've gotta!!!!"

    Kid Kicked Out looked at the doors of the LNHHQ slamming shut. No one
    was listening to him. "Please! He's Coming...!!!!"

    Kid Kicked Out looked up towards the sky. "He's coming."


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Looniverse Y! --
    A Beach! --


    Two girls were bathing their very tan bodies in the sun. In Bikinis!
    On beach blankets!

    One by the name of Salsa Jr. eyed the girl next to her. "Pardon me,
    would you have any -- 'No Duh! Poupon Flavored Soda'?"

    The girl whose name was Cherry Jr. said with a sniff of her nose, "But
    of course!" as she handed a glass bottle on a silver tray to the girl
    next to her.

    Hanging next to the two of them on a pole was a large poster that had a
    very well dressed short greenish creature on it. He was sporting a
    monocle, a top hat, and a tuxedo. On top were the words, 'Being Classy
    is Not a Crime.'

    And on the bottom were the words, 'A Reminder From -- The Sophisticated
    Grue!'



    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **



    "Who Cares About Tomorrow's Drool...?"



    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **




    Welcome to the future.

    They say that the meek will inherit the Earth. Nope. It's going to be
    the drooling idiots. Trust me on this one.

    God. My name is Cockroach Las Vegas. I'm a (hahah) Journalist. And
    the last bastard in the whole goddamn world. Oh, don't worry, there are
    still plenty of shitheads, motherfuckers, and other pathetic wastes of
    lives clogging the drain of civilization. But no more bastards. There
    was some virus (created by brilliant geniuses no doubt) that killed
    every single bastard in the world. Every one of them except for me. We
    used to have a club. Called it the NTB. What did it stand for?
    Neanderthal Thuggish Ballerinas -- something like that. Can't Exactly Remember. Doesn't matter. It's all gone. They're all gone.

    And I'm here. I'm writing some stupid article that my brain dead nazi
    editor inseminated into me. It's about some stupid spandexer that used
    to fight crime -- called the Slobbering Groin -- and I'm wondering why
    I'm doing this. I can't do this anymore.

    Fuck this. I'm not going to do this. I think I'll just blow my brains
    away instead.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Moono's Liquor World Noos Network --

    "...And that's the suicide note renowned sleazy tabloid journalist
    Cockroach Las Vegas left in his hotel room. He left behind no family or friends. And this latest Facetoob poll shows that 69% of people are
    glad that he's finally dead. The other 69% couldn't care one way or the
    other.

    "And speaking of things people don't care about, President
    Self-Righteous Preacher signed into Law a Bill that will make it illegal
    to expose your belly button on National TV. Hmm. Guess I better expose
    mine now while I still can..."



    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Espayola, Net.Mexico! --

    "No More Exposed Belly Buttons!!?" screamed a thirty something guy (with
    an eye patch) who was covered in green paint and wearing only boxers.
    "You see what your father is doing to this country!!" He shot a glance
    at the white haired thirty something girl (who also had an eye patch)
    sitting next to him on the couch.

    "Believe me -- I don't agree with this law. But maybe we should be a
    little more understanding of..." The girl's name was Non-Judgmental
    Agnostic. And she was President Self-Righteous Preacher's daughter.

    "Understanding!!?" The guy's name was Slobbering Grue Jr! son of --
    well you know (You do know, right?). "He's trying to turn America into
    a Christian Theocracy and you want ME to be understanding?"

    "I know. I know," she said rubbing his shoulder with her hand. "He's
    doing what he thinks is best. That's all I'm saying."

    "Yeah. I know. And I shouldn't take it out on you. We can't help who
    are our fathers are. It's just..."

    "He's got a lot of anger in him."

    "When was the last time you spoke to him?"

    "It's been a long time." She turned her head away. Slobbering Grue Jr!
    gently touched her hand. She pressed her head next to his green painted
    chest. "He hates everything I am. He doesn't want to deal with me.
    It's been like that ever since I was born. My birth was tough on him -- especially since he was the one who was pregnant."

    "I didn't know."

    "Yeah. It was some horrible prank played by one of his fellow LNH'rs.
    Some guy by the name of Mustard Blustard -- or something like that.
    This LNH'r edited another LNH'r named WikiBoy (I think) into like a Holy
    Spirit Ghost thingee, which caused my father to be pregnant by
    immaculate conception or something like that. Of course most people
    would have probably had an abortion after something like that, but not
    my father. He didn't believe in abortion. So he had me. But I think
    he blamed me for it."

    "God. I'm sorry."

    "It's all right. I always hope that one day he and I will -- I don't know."

    "Goddamn fathers." Slobbering Grue Jr! looked through the rain soaked
    studio apartment window into the dark night.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Somewhere! --

    An old balding man (with an eye patch) was watching some eXtreme skating
    on the tube while he ate a TV dinner. A long time ago, he was supposed
    to appear in the back-up to JONG issue three. He was THE SKATE. But
    that never happened. The writer was too lazy to write that back-up --
    so it didn't happen.

    Perhaps if that back-up had happened, his whole life would have been
    different. It might have been an incredibly awesome life full of wicked skating action.

    But now he was just a fat old bald man eating a tv dinner.

    And the TV dinner sucked.

    It sucked bad.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    The Moono's Liquor World LNHHQ! --

    Foreshadowing Lad eyes opened up. The bed felt strange. Where was he?
    He looked around. Something was covering one of his eyes. Some kind
    of eye patch. Why was he here? He saw a sign. 'The LNH Coma Ward'.
    Had he been in some kind of a coma? Then he heard a sound. Sounded
    like piano music. Why was he hearing piano music?

    And then a falling piano crushed Foreshadowing Lad to death.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **


    Namer Boy ran brushed his finger on his eye patch. It seemed like he
    had been leader of the LNH forever. But it had only been a few months.
    Why was he leader? It should be someone like Ultimate Ninja, Kid
    Kirby, Fearless Leader, Catalyst Lass, or even Even-Though-He'd-Really-Suck-As-LNH-Leader-He'd-Still-Be-A-Way-Better-Choice-Than-Namer-Boy
    Boy. But they were all gone. Gone forever. And he was here. "What
    did that hobo want?"

    You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad shrugged his shoulders. "I don't
    know. What do hobos usually want?"

    "Yeah. Who knows. Probably hobo stuff."

    You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad made a grunting sound to that.

    Pulls-Paper-Out-of-Hats Lad walked in (also sporting an eye patch).
    Namer Boy looked at him. "Something up?"

    Pulls-Paper-Out-of-Hats Lad took his hat off. "I don't know. Got this
    bad feeling. Haven't had a feeling like this since -- 'Every Loses an
    Eye and has to wear an Eye Patch From Now On Cry.Sig'.

    "God," said Namer Boy. 'Every Loses an Eye and has to wear an Eye Patch
    From Now On Cry.Sig'. "That Crossover Sucked."

    "Yeah," nodded You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad gritting his teeth,
    "It Sucked Bad."



    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **


    Washington, DC! --
    The Moono's Liquor World White House! --

    Self-Righteous Preacher (also wearing an eye patch) looked at the wall.
    It was covered in notes and pictures and maps. And everything was
    connected. And in the center of it was a drawing of some cat girl. He
    didn't know the name of this cat girl (or did he?). But he knew that
    she was responsible for all the evil in the world. This was why he had
    become President. So he would finally have the resources to stop this
    cat girl once and for all. But he had been distracted by a bunch of
    other nonsense. And now his second term was almost over. And he still
    hadn't found her.

    "Mr. President? I'm afraid I've got some bad news."

    "What?!" Self-Righteous Preacher scowled. "What's it this time!?"

    "It's Vice President Chuggernaut. He's been uh -- arrested -- again. Allegedly, he was robbing a bank and..."

    "Why!? Why did I ever make that degenerate bozo my VP?!"

    "Because you needed to win over the swing voters who choose there vice presidents based on who they'd like to have a beer with. As well as
    that Moono's Liquor World Corp. money!"

    "And now it's almost over! And what do I have to show for it!?"

    "Well, err, you did manage to ban exposed belly buttons on television!"

    The Preacher slammed his fist on his desk. "It's not enough! And she's
    still out there," he gazed at the picture of the cat girl. "Destroying America!"

    Another aide rushed into the room. "Have you seen it? It's on TV!
    Look!!" He pointed his TV clicker on the Oval Office TV and turned it on.

    It was some kind of spaceship hovering over Net.ropolis. The camera
    zoomed in on a face. It was some green toad like man dressed in a fancy tuxedo, with a top hat, and monocle over one eye. The Preacher blinked
    his eyes. It couldn't be! But it was! The Grue!

    The Grue had returned!


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Net.ropolis! --

    Namer Boy looked at the limp figure of Pulls-Paper-Out-of-Hats Lad.
    Blood and Nacho cheese sauce covered his body. He looked at You're Not
    Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad who was still fighting it -- the creature --
    The Nacho. Nacho the Leaping Nacho!! Everyone else was dead. Ripping
    Dancer. Ubiquitous Boy Lad Jr. Saxon-Brenton-Will-Write-the-Brother-of-So-Lame-Even-Saxon-Brenton-Wouldn't-Use-Him-In-A-Story-Lad-When-Hell-Freezes-Over
    Lad. The Saviors of the Net. All the Holiday Miracle Pets (This was
    happening during Holiday Miracle Pet Week)! They were all dead!

    Why was this happening? God. It can't be stopped. They needed Captain Continuity, Kid Kirby, The Ultimate Ninja. But they weren't here
    anymore. Leaping Nacho Hurter had warned them that this day would come.
    He looked at the dead body of Leaping Nacho Hurter next to the dead
    body of Goggles Guy. He couldn't even stop it.

    He heard a sickening snap. He knew You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough
    Lad was dead. Namer Boy bit his lip. He was now the last LNH'r. He
    was humanities last chance. Namer Boy took out a knife and cut into his
    hand. He used his blood to scrawl words onto a bomb that was next to
    him. He looked at the words. "I name you Death! Death to All Nachos!!!"

    He clicked a button. The bomb would activate the moment his heart
    stopped. And then he looked at Nacho the Leaping Nacho who was still
    leaping over the corpses of all his dead teammates. He pointed his gun
    at the Nacho and pulled the trigger. There was a loud bang. The bullet ricocheted off the body of Nacho the Leaping Nacho. Nacho the Leaping
    Nacho looked straight into Namer Boy's direction. There was contempt in
    its eyes (well if it had eyes -- they were probably more like those
    little specks that all tortilla chips have). It began to leap towards
    Namer Boy.

    That's right, you bastard, come closer. Namer Boy took a couple more shots.

    And then a large shadow eclipsed the whole battleground. Both Nacho the Leaping Nacho and Namer Boy looked up. It was a space ship. A very
    large space ship. Nacho the Leaping Nacho ignoring Namer Boy leapt
    towards the space ship. But before it could reach the ship it was
    blasted by some type of laser cannon.

    Namer Boy watched the ray totally disintegrate Nacho the Leaping Nacho.
    What the hell was that thing? And then he looked in horror as the ray
    began to blast over the rest of Net.ropolis too.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    The Moono's Liquor World Net.Mexico Institute for the Criminally Inane --

    "Okay," said a prison guard with a clipboard. "Due to overcrowding,
    we've gotten orders to release all of the JONG supervillains from this
    prison! So, any JONG supervillain -- line up over there. You! Plum
    Master! Go over there!"

    "Moi?" said Plum Master polishing one of his plums. "I'm afraid there
    must be a mistake. I'm an Easily-Discovered Man villain, not a JONG
    villain! I mean I may have done one (okay -- two) issues of that series
    -- but that was when I was young. I really needed the money! It was
    really hard times and..."

    "Says here that you're a JONG villain. You want to be released -- or not!?"

    "Well, I suppose so."

    "Are you sane -- or insane?"

    "Hmm," said Plum Master as he pondered that question. "I better consult
    with my mental therapy plum!" Plum Master dug out a plum out of one of
    his pockets and put it next to his ear. "Yes? You don't say! Ahah!
    Yes, yes, yes!" And then Plum Master looked back at the prison guard.
    "My mental therapy plum says that I'm completely sane. Completely
    Sane!!!!! Heeheheheheheheheheheheehheehh!!!!!!!"

    "Okay. Sign right here." Plum Master quickly signed the form. "And
    you?" said the Prison Guard looking at a gigantic robot that had the
    ability to change into a dumpster. The Robo-MAC known as --
    Dumpster-TRON!!! "Sane or Insane?"

    "Sane, you worthless squishie!! And once you free me -- I shall make it
    my everlasting goal to slaughter every single one of you pathetic
    squishies!!! I will paint this world with your blood!!!! So, swears Dumpster-TRON!!!!!"

    "Uhuh. Sign here. And you?" said the guard to the supervillain dressed
    in a costume made up of the pages of JONG #7. The villain known as The-Villain-That-Would-Have-Appeared-In-JONG-#7-If-The-Writer-Had-Bothered-to-Write-That-Far!
    "Sane -- Insane?"

    "Sane!! Umm. No, wait! I meant insane!! Wait!! No!! I mean --
    Sane? Right? That's the correct answer, right?"


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **


    "Wow! A bus!" said Plum Master who was being escorted with a number of
    other supervillains towards it. "Is that our bus?"

    "Dumpster-TRON hates buses!!!" said Dumpster-TRON not exactly thrilled
    that he'd be taking a bus ride.

    "Ooh! Firsts on the Front Seat! Front Seat!!" shouted a man wearing a
    labcoat covered in 'F's rushing onto the bus. The Fiendish Dr. F!

    "Hah! My plan is going perfectly!! First I managed to convince those
    gullible prison guards that I was a JONG villain -- and now I'm getting
    on a bus!!!! Hahahahah!!!!" cackled
    Greatest-Most-Awesome-LNH-Villain-Ever Master Man. And then a bit of
    sadness washed into his face. "Just wish Charlie Sheen was alive to see
    this."

    A really large woman that looked a bit like 'Throw Mama From the Train'
    star Anne Ramsey stomped her way onto the bus. "Stupid Socialist Bus!
    A Commie form of Trasportation!! Country's going to Hell! Damn Obama
    Care Death Panels!!! Ron Paul 2012!!! Going to get my rent money from
    my commie son and that commie whore he's sleeping with!! From his damn
    Commie father too!!! If it's the last thing I do!!!! Coming for you,
    Grue!!!! Coming for you!!!! Damn Commies!!!!" Land Lady sat down and
    lit herself a cigar as she muttered away.

    A man in a robe covered in tattoos depicting every single in-continuity
    RACC story shook his head. "People! This is an Elsewhirl! Everything
    that happens in it is meaningless! This whole bus trip is going to be meaningless no matter what happens! God. Doesn't that bother you
    people?" Continuity Porn Star sighed.

    "Fourth Wallower Even More Powerful!!!" pointed out Fourth Wallower as
    it sat down.

    "How about a sing-along?" said Plum Master. "We could all sing Yoko Ono
    songs during the trip. Umm. I mean -- I mean the plums want to sing
    Yoko Ono songs -- not me! The Plums!! I don't like Yoko Ono -- the
    plums like her! You've gotta believe me, guys!!! Guys??"

    "A vun, and a two, and a..." said the Robot with Lawrence Welk's Brain
    taking out his accordion.

    As all the supervillains had finally seated themselves, the bus driver
    closed the vehicle's door. He took a glance back and then grabbed a
    bottle from out of a paper bag. This was going to be a long trip.
    Better get ready for it, he thought unscrewing a bottle. He slugged
    back the econo-size bottle of Moono's Liquor World Brand Rot Gut.

    There had once been a time long ago, when he had been an LNH
    receptionist. A receptionist by the name of Buddy the Hard-Drinking-Liquored-Up LNH Receptionist. But that was a lifetime
    ago. Another Age.

    Now he was a bus driver. Buddy the Hard-Drinking-Liquored-Up Bus Driver.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Net.ropolis! --

    Namer Boy eyes opened up. Where was he? He looked at the clothes he
    was wearing. Why was he wearing these fancy duds? Namer Boy began to
    rise from the bed he had been laying on when You're Not Hitting Me Hard
    Enough Lad glided into the room. You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad
    was attired in a tux and a top hat and had a monocle over one eye.

    "You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad!? You're alive!"

    "But of course, old chap," said You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad
    taking a pipe out of his mouth. "Jolly good to see that you're up and
    about. Very messy business -- that Nacho the Leaping Nacho affair.
    Very unpleasant."

    "But I saw it kill you! You and all the rest of the..."

    "Nonsense." You're Not Hitting Me Hard Enough Lad thumped his chest.
    "Fit as a fiddle. Nothing the old Sophistication Ray couldn't clear up.
    Better than new."

    "The Sophistication Ray?"

    "Yes. Let's just say that it's a way to tame the more barbaric and
    vulgar elements that are infecting this great world of ours."

    "I see."

    "Yes. Our benefactor will enlighten you with more tantalizing details
    of this grand scheme to elevate this dear realm we exist on -- to pluck
    it away from those that would sully it with their lowbrow high jinks.
    But first, if you may pardon me, would you by chance have any -- dare I
    say -- Mr. Paprika Poupon?"

    Namer Boy started to shake his head. And then he noticed something.
    There was a silver platter next to him. A silver platter with something
    on it. A fancy glass pitcher of Mr. Paprik Poupon. And try as he
    might, he just couldn't resist saying, "But of course!"


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **


    Washington, DC! --
    The Moono's Liquor World White House! --

    "It's not the Slobbering Grue!, Mr. President! This one calls himself
    -- The Sophisticated Grue!"

    "They're all the same!" spat President Self-Righteous Preacher.

    "Perhaps, but the info we got from our top guys says that this Grue is
    from someplace called the -- what was it? Oh, yes! The Oddball
    Looniverse! And this being before he got here had been busy conquering
    and enslaving a number of other Looniverses! This is big!!"

    The Oddball Looniverse? Yes, thought the Preacher, He remembered
    something like that. He had met a counterpart from. What was his name,
    Ralph Tight [A profane word!] Peacher? Something blasphemous like that!
    "It's a perversion, this Looniverse! It mocks our One True Looniverse
    by even existing!! It must end! I must stop this abomination!!!!"

    The Preacher grabbed a bible and a cross. And then he walked out of the
    Oval Office.

    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Sarge and Kid watched as the Preacher stomped away. "Should we stop
    him?" said Kid, "I mean considering since we're secret service agents
    assigned to protect the President?"

    "Kid, Kid, Kid," said Sarge shaking his head with a grin. "That's the
    first thing an assassin expects! They expect you to protect the
    President! No. You got to get in their heads. Do the things that they
    don't expect if you want to get the drop on them! That's why you don't
    protect the President! And when an assassin sees how you're totally not protecting the President, it screws with their mind. They don't know
    what's going on! And then BAM! You got them! And you've just saved
    the President's life. And they have a parade in your honor."

    "Wow. I feel really stupid!"

    "Don't beat yourself, Kid," Sarge said patting his young protege on the
    back. "Happens to the best of us."

    "Thanks, Sarge! Man, speaking of assassins -- remember that case way
    back when?"

    "Case?"

    "Yeah. It involved a cat. A cat with glasses. [Ed note: See the NTB one-shot 'Who Killed the Cat with Glasses?']"

    "Let's not talk about that. Ancient history."

    "But I always can't help but wonder about that case. It was like we
    were getting close to something. Some truth..."

    "I don't want to talk about this!"

    "But why? Why are scared to talk about it? It's..."

    "Brad Pitt isn't cool!!! He just isn't!!!!!"

    "I wasn't talking about that. Although he is very cool. I was talking
    about something else. It was like this realization about us..."

    "Kid!"

    "How we were connected in some way. Deeper than friends. Deeper than
    family. Deeper than lovers..."

    "Kid!!!!"

    "Deeper than twins. Can't you feel it, Sarge? How we're..."

    "I'm not listening to this!"

    "...We always seem to be in the same place at the same time? How we
    have the same beliefs about everything. The same dreams. The same..."

    "I'm not listening," said Sarge covering both ears with his hands. "Lalallalalalalalal!!!! Not listening! Not listening!!!"

    "The same everything? About the only really significant difference
    between the two of us is our opinion of whether Brad Pitt is cool."

    "Lalalalallalalal!!! Brad Pitt is Lame!! Lalalalallalalalalala!!
    Still not listening!!!!"


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **


    Somewhere! --

    A man staring at a monitor in a dark room gazed at Sarge and Kid having
    a conversation. His hand holding a joystick tightly began to tremble.
    A bit of drool dripped from his mouth and ran down his chin.



    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Washington, DC! --
    The Moono's Liquor World National Nuclear Missile Launching Facility! --

    "Are you sure you want to do this, sir?" said one of the military
    personnel that had helped President Self-Righteous Preacher onto the
    nuclear missile saddle. "I don't think this is a very good idea, sir.
    I mean..."

    "Don't worry, my son," said the Preacher straddling the nuclear missile.
    In one hand, he had a bible. In the other, he had a gigantic cross.
    "God rides with me! Begin the launch Code!!"

    "If you say so," shrugged the military man as he hopped into a jeep.

    And the Preacher began to pray.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    The wind roared through the Preacher's hair. The hat that he'd been
    wearing was long gone. But as loud as the wind was, it could not drown
    out the words that thundered out of the Preacher mouth as he rocketed
    towards his final destination. His hands strangled the Bible and Cross
    he was holding. And finally he could see it. The Spaceship. The
    Ungodly Obscenity that was violating the sky with its sinful presence!

    He would wipe this atrocity with this Sword of Righteousness he was
    riding on. He would send it back to hell that it had crawled out of!

    And as he got closer and closer, he remembered something. Something he
    had long forgotten. It was a name. A devilish name. A name of a
    temptress. A siren. It was a cat girl's name.

    And right before he hit the space ship, he screamed the name out. "PANTA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" It would be the last thing he would ever
    say.

    And then the Preacher for the first time in his whole entire life had something. Something that he had never had before.

    He had an orgasm.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    A short green toad like man wearing a tuxedo and top hat watched the
    exploding missile light up the sky.

    "Ho hum," the Sophisticated Grue! said as he sipped the cognac he was
    holding. "How completely uncivilized. Really." He shook his head and
    took another sip.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Espayola, Net.Mexico! --

    Tears streamed down the face Non-Judgmental Agnostic. Her eyes avoided
    the TV that was blaring away with the news story about her father's death.

    "I'm sorry," said Slobbering Grue Jr! trying his best to comfort her.
    "I didn't like him, but I never wanted this."

    Her nose sniffed. "I know. I can't -- cant't! God. There was so much
    I wanted to..." She paused as if lost in thought. "It's too late now."

    Slobbering Grue Jr! put his arms around her. "He loved you."

    "I -- I don't know."

    Slobbering Grue Jr! gazed at the TV. "I need to stop this. Stop him!"

    "Is he your -- your father?"

    "No. My father would never wear a tux. No, I don't know who he is.
    Some pretender. Some -- I've got to stop it."

    "No. Please. Don't go. Stay here. I need you. Please."

    "I'll stay. Probably couldn't do anything worthwhile anyways."
    Slobbering Grue Jr! sighed to himself. "God. Our parents sure screwed
    us up. Never wanted to be a superhero. Just wanted to watch TV. Watch
    TV forever. Get paid to watch TV. Why can't that happen?"

    Non Judgmental-Agnostic grabbed a tissue and blew her nose. "Well. You
    never know. Maybe the dreams of everyone will come true some day. Even
    ours."

    Slobbering Grue Jr! brushed his fingers along her hair. "Who cares
    about tomorrow...?"


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    A Net.Mexico highway! --

    "Well. This guy is plumb dead," said Sarge kicking a plum out of the
    hand of the corpse.

    "That guy?" said Kid. "Isn't he, Plum Master? God. What happened
    here?" Kid looked at the rolled over bus and all the corpses of dead supervillains.

    Sarge looked at the body of the bus driver. The bus driver's head had a
    bottle of Econo Size Moono's Liquor World Bran Rot Gut embedded into his
    head. Sarge dipped his finger on the bus driver and then tasted it.
    "Hmm. Econo Size Moono's Liquor World Bran Rot Gut. Something happened
    here. Maybe these liquor bottles became sentient and attacked the bus
    driver causing the bus to crash. Who knows. This maybe one of those
    mysteries that no one ever solves."

    "Or maybe the bus driver was really drunk and couldn't drive the bus
    that well because..."

    "Kid, Kid, Kid," Sarge smiled shaking his head. "You've been watching
    to many cartoons. It's never that simple. Never."

    "I guess you're probably right, Sarge. Say, is it just me, or is it
    kind of weird how we were like Secret Service Agents in D.C. and now
    we're like highway patrol men or something?"

    "Kid. This is an issue of JONG. It doesn't live by those boring
    storytelling rules that your typical unimaginative periodicals exist by.
    No. It dares its readers to come up with their own clever
    explanations of why what they're reading isn't completely horrible storytelling."

    "Wow. I didn't know that."

    "Let it be a lesson to grow on," said Sarge as he chomped on Plum
    Master's mental therapist plum.


    ** LAST ISSUE!!! **

    Somewhere! --

    "How's he doing?" said a man in a snazzy business suit. His eyes were
    locked onto the monitor man. The monitor man began moving the joystick.

    "He's still trapped in the game, Mr. Velk. He can't figure it out. How
    to win. Or how to get out of it. Now it looks like he's bringing back
    the Grue."

    "The Sophisticated Grue?"


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  • From Jeanne Morningstar@21:1/5 to Arthur Spitzer on Mon Feb 28 18:04:35 2022
    On 2/27/22 3:12 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:

    Part of why I never bothered to write it was because I wanted to make it
    the greatest thing ever (which is also why I couldn't finish the
    original Jong #6 that I had plotted way back in '96). There for the
    only way I could ever possibly write this would be instead to try and
    make this the worst issue of Jong ever. And that's what I did.

    So this isn't the greatest thing I ever wrote, but it's not the worst
    thing either. I kind of wish this was a lot better, but it is what it is.



    Lol, I know that one. I think a lot of us do. I know the old saying
    about how to get good writing you have to just write, but it's still
    hard to remember sometimes.


    --
    Jeanne "The Dark Space Princess Knight" Morningstar

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  • From Arthur Spitzer@21:1/5 to Jeanne Morningstar on Tue Mar 1 23:01:05 2022
    On Monday, February 28, 2022 at 11:04:36 AM UTC-7, Jeanne Morningstar wrote:
    On 2/27/22 3:12 PM, Arthur Spitzer wrote:

    Part of why I never bothered to write it was because I wanted to make it the greatest thing ever (which is also why I couldn't finish the
    original Jong #6 that I had plotted way back in '96). There for the
    only way I could ever possibly write this would be instead to try and
    make this the worst issue of Jong ever. And that's what I did.

    So this isn't the greatest thing I ever wrote, but it's not the worst
    thing either. I kind of wish this was a lot better, but it is what it is.


    Lol, I know that one. I think a lot of us do. I know the old saying
    about how to get good writing you have to just write, but it's still
    hard to remember sometimes.


    Yeah, I think back in the 90s (which is when I first thought about making
    JONG #69) my writing mode was kind of think of a good first sentence and
    then think of a good second sentence and keep doing that till you reach the
    end of your story, which often led to 'I can't think of a good first sentence -- guess I'll
    give up!' Now days my method is usually write something anything even if
    it seems bad and maybe when it's done perhaps I can polish it up a bit
    (or just leave it on my laptop and forget about it)...

    Arthur "Writing.." Spitzer

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