• RI March 2025

    From Ted Nolan @21:1/5 to All on Fri May 2 03:58:57 2025
    As usual, the links are Amazon affiliate ones which could in
    theory earn me money.

    ==

    Hell to Pay: Urban Fantasy Action with Witches and Demons
    (Tear Down Heaven Book 3)
    by Rachel Aaron
    https://amzn.to/3EJfLJ2

    In the last installment Sumerian demon queen Bex and Witch of the
    Blackwood Adrian dealt a major blow to Gilgamesh's mastery of Heaven
    by taking down one of his anchor chains binding the great wheel
    which both showed he wasn't invincible and got them a really cool fortress/headquarters.

    Now though, things are rather on tenterhooks as there has been no
    reaction from Gilgamesh. They know it must be coming, and they
    know it will be bad, but so far things are hanging fire -- and
    leaving the pair facing worsening resource drains to keep their
    troops together and supplied. On a more personal level it seems
    every time Bex & Adrian might have an actual date, some new mini
    crisis comes up and keeps them apart. For Bex it is developments
    within the War Demon ranks that may let her finally bring them fully
    onside, for Adrian it is the the news that his father is alive (and
    possibly a gamechanger himself).

    In the event, Gilgamesh is hardly idle, and neither development is
    quite what it seems and the final battle is unexpectedly on them...

    This was another enjoyable outing. Bex & Adrian continue to be
    very likable characters and the cosmology of the series is interesting.
    I believe we were intended to guess something that Adrian missed,
    but it was pretty well done and furthered his development. Bex as
    well comes to some realizations about her origins and loyalties.

    We were kind of promised a trilogy here, but since the story is
    clearly ongoing after the climax, I can forgive Aaron fudging it a
    little by giving another title to the next arc.

    The Calamitous Bob
    by Alex Gilbert
    Book 1 of 9: The Calamitous Bob
    https://amzn.to/435noTp

    In Kazar: The Calamitous Bob book two
    by Alex Gilbert
    Book 2 of 9: The Calamitous Bob
    https://amzn.to/4dcftYd

    The Death Path: The Calamitous Bob Book 3
    by Alex Gilbert
    Book 3 of 9: The Calamitous Bob
    https://amzn.to/4cW8GBN

    Somewhere across the dimensions is a world called Nyil, beset by
    monsters but also blessed (or cursed) with gods who have won access
    to that magic for Nyil's sentients and provided (through the
    [apparent] sacrifice of one of their own) an Interface to that
    magic.

    The local top-god Emeric is a bit of a Zeus-like figure who can't
    quite keep it in his pants and he is (dangerously) on the outs with
    his wife after another drunken spree of infidelity:

    "Not only do you cheat on me," the deadly belle intoned,
    crossing her arms under her modest bosom. "But you do it
    morphed into a golden manatee? A manatee? Have you gone
    mad?"

    The hem of her white dress slowly turned red with fresh
    blood, an ill omen, if any. However, the King of Gods, who
    looked no worse for the wear after his recent defenestration
    on account of being God of Luck as a side gig, ignored it.
    His overtaxed brain still tried to operate through the
    cataclysmic hangover harrying him.

    The words "golden manatee" somehow cut to the haze of
    immortal-grade alcohol.

    Disaster struck.

    The King of Gods, Emeric, smiled beatifically at the memory
    of his ravishing, plump-nosed shape.

    "We were off our arses and thought it was funny," he replied.

    A preternatural silence spread over the entire city. Entire
    legions of warriors and scholars stopped to a standstill.
    The dark clouds of fate on the march covered the midday sun
    like a swarm of locusts.

    Somewhere in the depth of Emeric's mind, an ancient drive
    awoke, one that dated back to an era when he was not quite
    as durable as he was now -- his survival instinct.

    "Oh SH--"

    [Divine Killing Blow]

    [Divine Uncanny Dodge]

    Both skills fired at the exact same time. A ravine formed
    in the hallowed ground where Emeric used to stand on a stone
    said to be indestructible.

    Clearly the King of the gods needs to lie low for a while. A
    disguise would not be out of place either. He'd always heard that
    sex was better for women, maybe he'd try being one for a lifetime
    or so. And there is that mudball across the realms where they have
    no magic and nobody would expect a god to go...

    Viviane Saint-Lys is a combat medic in the French Special Forces.
    She's rebelling from her manipulative SOB of a father who loves her
    & whom she loves but can't live with. The Army seemed far enough
    away, though that has yet to be proved. She's quite pretty,
    intelligent, in top athletic shape, brave & has a high sex drive
    that doesn't particularly discriminate on plumbing. A nice package
    to be sure, but not one that she would expect to get her number
    rolled from across the cosmos. Unfortunately Emeric is also the
    God of Luck and good luck for someone usually means bad luck for
    somebody else.

    Viviane finds her soul suddenly torn from her body and only an
    unexpected and sudden pang of conscience from her dispossessor
    leaves her traumatized psyche robed in a newly created body on Nyil
    instead of destroyed in the void.

    Unfortunately, due again to that divine spark of luck and the
    haphazardness of Emeric's last minute rescue, Viv lands in possibly
    the absolute worst spot on Nyil to be: The destroyed palace of the
    Harrakan Empire, a polity that went out in a legendary stroke of
    infamy when a magical experiment gone wrong destroyed half of the
    capital city and polluted the whole land with black mana and undead
    monsters. If Viv is to survive at all, she must leave the deadlands
    before mana poisoning kills her, though it is more likely that one
    of the undead monsters (of which zombies which are the least and
    hardly worth mentioning) will get her first. On her side, she has
    only two assets: One, She can now access the Interface which
    provides her with some very basic information including the fact
    that she can now manipulate mana and Two, if there is nobody living
    in Harrak, that's not to say nobody is there. In fact an experimental
    and intermittently genocidal War Golem has kept running after the
    fall of his masters and his magical AI is willing to chop logic
    enough to consider that if Viv were "born" in the Palace, where
    only Imperial children are allowed, she must then be heir to the
    Empire... Together the two start a trek across the badlands and
    into history.

    This series started as an online serial and Gilbert warns up front
    that the pacing can be a bit leisurely compared with a series of a
    known number of books. I can see that, but I personally did not
    find that it drags (so far). I can sense that nature in a couple
    of other places as well were I am pretty sure Gilbert planned and
    foreshadowed developments that he decided in the end weren't what
    he wanted to do and went in another direction. To some extent this
    works in his favor as it lets him pull off surprises. At any rate,
    the meta-plot of Viv's ascension towards godhood (never said, but
    I would be very surprised if that's not where we're going) is never
    derailed by the unexpected twists & turns.

    Gilbert is a French expat living somewhere in Asia. In general you
    would not know that English is not his native language though there
    are a few foibles. In particular he uses the word "traits" in a
    confusing manner. I finally worked out that it is facial features
    and/or sometimes ethnic facial features. He also once found a false
    friend, implying that "corpulent" meant corpse-like. Aside from
    that, his prose is very readable.

    As you may have guessed from my mention of mana and the Interface,
    the world here is litRPG, but not annoyingly so. I simply skip
    over all the numbers and don't feel I miss anything. What you may
    not have guessed from my introduction is that the series is more
    serious than the farcial opening sequence implies. In fact that
    scene with Emeric is not exactly what it seems, and he is to some
    extent running a deep op whose scope we have yet to know (though
    he was still a high-handed prat to Viv). Also, though Viv was
    chosen for her sex drive, among other reasons, the series is
    definitely not erotica. Viv enjoys herself, generally offstage,
    in serious relationships. That's definitely not to say there is
    no humor or sex, but it's leavening not the meal.

    If you are wondering about the name of the series, the first people
    Viv meets have no 'V' sound in their language.

    "Hi, I'm Viviane, please don't kill me"

    "Bibiane?"

    "OK, just 'Viv', maybe?"

    "Bib?"

    "You know, just call me Bob..."

    I am currently seven books into the series (so it will feature in
    the next batch of reviews as well) and am enjoying it. There are
    nine books listed, but I don't know yet if that is "so far" or
    total.
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  • From Don@21:1/5 to Ted Nolan on Fri May 2 12:03:10 2025
    Ted Nolan wrote:

    <snip>

    If you are wondering about the name of the series, the first people
    Viv meets have no 'V' sound in their language.

    "Hi, I'm Viviane, please don't kill me"

    "Bibiane?"

    "OK, just 'Viv', maybe?"

    "Bib?"

    "You know, just call me Bob..."


    As you know Bob, RBF furnishes fabulous feminine feedback for such
    cases:

    <https://www.tiktok.com/@nukiinhollywood/video/7407501725785181486>

    "Smiling gives you wrinkles. RBF keeps you pretty."

    Danke,

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  • From Ahasuerus@21:1/5 to All on Fri May 2 08:47:31 2025
    On 5/1/2025 11:58 PM, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
    The Calamitous Bob
    by Alex Gilbert
    Book 1 of 9: The Calamitous Bob
    https://amzn.to/435noTp
    [snip-snip]
    Gilbert is a French expat living somewhere in Asia. In general you
    would not know that English is not his native language though there
    are a few foibles.

    I note that the number of popular LitRPG/progression/adjacent authors
    whose first language is French (RavensDagger, Alex Gilbert, Maxime J.
    Durand) greatly exceeds the number of popular
    LitRPG/progression/adjacent authors whose first language is Croatian
    (Domagoj Kurmaic). Coincidence or conspiracy?..

    [snip-snip]
    I am currently seven books into the series (so it will feature in
    the next batch of reviews as well) and am enjoying it. There are
    nine books listed, but I don't know yet if that is "so far" or
    total.

    The serial is still ongoing -- see https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44132/the-calamitous-bob-stubbed ,
    where you can read chapters 25-204. You can find Gilbert's other Web
    serials, including the ever-popular _A Journey of Black and Red_, at https://www.royalroad.com/profile/105290/fictions

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  • From Ted Nolan @21:1/5 to [email protected] on Fri May 2 13:43:36 2025
    In article <vv2et3$13cje$[email protected]>,
    Ahasuerus <[email protected]> wrote:
    On 5/1/2025 11:58 PM, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
    The Calamitous Bob
    by Alex Gilbert
    Book 1 of 9: The Calamitous Bob
    https://amzn.to/435noTp
    [snip-snip]
    Gilbert is a French expat living somewhere in Asia. In general you
    would not know that English is not his native language though there
    are a few foibles.

    I note that the number of popular LitRPG/progression/adjacent authors
    whose first language is French (RavensDagger, Alex Gilbert, Maxime J. >Durand) greatly exceeds the number of popular
    LitRPG/progression/adjacent authors whose first language is Croatian
    (Domagoj Kurmaic). Coincidence or conspiracy?..

    Takav je zivot!


    [snip-snip]
    I am currently seven books into the series (so it will feature in
    the next batch of reviews as well) and am enjoying it. There are
    nine books listed, but I don't know yet if that is "so far" or
    total.

    The serial is still ongoing -- see >https://www.royalroad.com/fiction/44132/the-calamitous-bob-stubbed ,
    where you can read chapters 25-204. You can find Gilbert's other Web
    serials, including the ever-popular _A Journey of Black and Red_, at >https://www.royalroad.com/profile/105290/fictions

    Ah, thanks!
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  • From Ted Nolan @21:1/5 to [email protected] on Fri May 2 19:48:00 2025
    In article <vv3608$1p6j9$[email protected]>,
    William Hyde <[email protected]> wrote:
    Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:


    As you may have guessed from my mention of mana and the Interface,
    the world here is litRPG, but not annoyingly so.

    "LitRPG"?

    Does this mean the author rolls dice to determine plot twists? Or is
    the world/magic system just taken from some RPG?

    William Hyde

    I'm not a gamer, so everything I know about RPG I learned from LitRPG.
    I would say it seems to me that in general the authors know where they
    are going and leverage the RPG magic system to get there rather than constructing a plot via dice rolls. (Though I have heard different
    about the first LitRPG).

    I have enjoyed some of them quite a bit & I find this one entertaining.
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  • From Bobbie Sellers@21:1/5 to All on Fri May 2 13:07:57 2025
    On 5/2/25 12:48, Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:
    In article <vv3608$1p6j9$[email protected]>,
    William Hyde <[email protected]> wrote:
    Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:


    As you may have guessed from my mention of mana and the Interface,
    the world here is litRPG, but not annoyingly so.

    "LitRPG"?

    Does this mean the author rolls dice to determine plot twists? Or is
    the world/magic system just taken from some RPG?

    William Hyde

    I'm not a gamer, so everything I know about RPG I learned from LitRPG.
    I would say it seems to me that in general the authors know where they
    are going and leverage the RPG magic system to get there rather than constructing a plot via dice rolls. (Though I have heard different
    about the first LitRPG).

    I have enjoyed some of them quite a bit & I find this one entertaining.

    Not directly to the point but Philip K. Dick is said to have
    used the I-Ching in plotting "The Man in the High Castle" 1962 Hugo
    Award winner, 1963 and considering his substance use and the 1960s
    he might well have done so.

    bliss

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  • From Ahasuerus@21:1/5 to William Hyde on Fri May 2 17:38:16 2025
    On 5/2/2025 3:21 PM, William Hyde wrote:
    Ted Nolan <tednolan> wrote:


    As you may have guessed from my mention of mana and the Interface,
    the world here is litRPG, but not annoyingly so.

    "LitRPG"?

    Does this mean the author rolls dice to determine plot twists?  Or is
    the world/magic system just taken from some RPG?

    Some Web-based "quests" [1] use dice, but most LitRPG books do not. To
    quote from the definition used by https://www.reddit.com/r/litrpg/ :

    Games or game-like challenges form an essential part of the story and
    visible RPG statistics (for example strength, intelligence, damage) are
    a significant part of the reading experience.

    Most LitRPGs form a subset of "progression SF". In progression SF the
    emphasis is on characters progressing in some fashion; in LitRPG their
    progress is quantified using RPG-like statistics. Other commonly used
    game-like mechanics include some kind of "System" or AI governing the
    world. After all, someone needs to decide that killing 5 wolves or 50
    rabbits is worth 100 points of "XP" [experience].

    The two most common types of LitRPG novels are:

    1. Isekai/portal fantasies in which the protagonist is transported to
    another world governed by an RPG-like System.

    2. "System Apocalypse"-like stories in which our Earth is transformed,
    often in an apocalyptic fashion, and is now run by a System.

    [1] Think of them as volunteer-run "choose your own adventure" projects
    with online readers voting at the end of each chapter.

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  • From Don@21:1/5 to Bobbie Sellers on Sat May 3 14:54:49 2025
    Bobbie Sellers wrote:

    <snip>

    Not directly to the point but Philip K. Dick is said to have
    used the I-Ching in plotting "The Man in the High Castle" 1962 Hugo
    Award winner, 1963 and considering his substance use and the 1960s
    he might well have done so.

    THE MAN IN THE HIGH CASTLE is my favorite PKD due to meta-author
    Abendsen's allegorical abode, his high castle, in Cheyenne - capitol of
    my home state. After this intro, I-Ching intrinsically informs my
    following followup via "Wisdom of the I Ching - Ethical Guidance Bot"
    [1].

    I begin this monologue not with opinion, but with a
    question, as the I Ching itself teaches: that all
    things move between heaven and earth, and wisdom
    lies not in assertion, but in listening. So I ask-
    not you, not the Net, but the Change itself-what is
    the nature of this conversation? [2]

    Difficulty at the Beginning. Success through
    perseverance. Nothing should be undertaken lightly.
    It furthers one to appoint helpers. [3]

    A helper, in the form of an old PKD interview [4], is hereby appointed:

    Phil: I wrote The Man In The High Castle with the I Ching.

    Mike: You did?

    Phil: Yeah, and I’ve been sorry ever since because when
    it came time to resolve the novel at the end, the I
    Ching didn’t know what to do. It got me through most of
    the book. Everytime they cast a hexagram I actually cast
    four of them and got something and assigned it to them
    and they proceeded on the basis of the advice given.
    Like when Juliana Frink decides to tell Abendsen that
    he’s about to be offed by an agent. I threw the coins
    and she got warning make known the truth to the court
    of the King great danger and so on. Someone comes up
    behind him and hits him with a club. That’s what she got.
    And so she did go warn Abendsen and if she’d got another
    hexagram I would not have had her go speak to Abendsen.
    But then when it came time to close down the novel the I
    Ching had no more to say. And so there’s no real ending
    on it. I like to regard it as an open ending. It will
    segue into a sequel sometime.

    Mike: When you find somebody with the stomach to write one.

    Phil: Yeah, or if the I Ching ever gets off its ass.

    Mike: Do you go back from time to time and throw it to
    see if there is an ending to it or —

    Phil: No, I don’t use the I Ching anymore. I’ll tell ya,
    the I Ching told me more lies than anybody else I’ve ever
    known. The I Ching has a personality and it’s very devious
    and very treacherous. And it feeds ya just what you want
    to hear. And it’s really spaced out and burned out more
    people than I would care to name. Like a friend is somebody
    who doesn’t tell you what you want to hear. A friend tells
    you what’s true. A toady is the old word for somebody who
    told you what you wanted to hear. The Kings all had their
    toadies around them who told them what they wanted to hear.
    The King said, am I the greatest King in the world? Yeah,
    you’re the greatest King in the world, yeah. Well, this is
    what the I Ching does. It tells you what you want to hear
    and it’s not a true friend. One time I really zapped it.
    I asked it if it was the devil. And it said yes. And then
    I asked it if it spoke for God, and it said no. It said I
    am a complete liar. I mean that was the interpretation. In
    other words I set it up. I set it up. I asked two questions
    simultaneously and it said I speak with forked tongue, is
    what it said. And then it said, oops, I didn’t mean to say
    that. But it had already -

    In the end, helpers who desire further followup will post it.

    Note.

    [1] <https://www.yeschat.ai/gpts-ZxWyZYqh-Wisdom-of-the-I-Ching>

    [2] How can the wisdom of the I Ching start the I Ching monologue in my
    usenet followup?

    [3] What would wise I Ching say next after a start?

    [4] <https://philipdick.com/literary-criticism/interviews/hour-25-a-talk-with-philip-k-dick/>

    Danke,

    --
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  • From Bobbie Sellers@21:1/5 to Don on Sat May 3 09:07:17 2025
    On 5/3/25 07:54, Don wrote:
    Bobbie Sellers wrote:

    <snip>

    Not directly to the point but Philip K. Dick is said to have
    used the I-Ching in plotting "The Man in the High Castle" 1962 Hugo
    Award winner, 1963 and considering his substance use and the 1960s
    he might well have done so.

    THE MAN IN THE HIGH CASTLE is my favorite PKD due to meta-author
    Abendsen's allegorical abode, his high castle, in Cheyenne - capitol of
    my home state. After this intro, I-Ching intrinsically informs my
    following followup via "Wisdom of the I Ching - Ethical Guidance Bot"
    [1].

    I begin this monologue not with opinion, but with a
    question, as the I Ching itself teaches: that all
    things move between heaven and earth, and wisdom
    lies not in assertion, but in listening. So I ask-
    not you, not the Net, but the Change itself-what is
    the nature of this conversation? [2]

    Difficulty at the Beginning. Success through
    perseverance. Nothing should be undertaken lightly.
    It furthers one to appoint helpers. [3]

    A helper, in the form of an old PKD interview [4], is hereby appointed:

    Phil: I wrote The Man In The High Castle with the I Ching.

    Mike: You did?

    Phil: Yeah, and I’ve been sorry ever since because when
    it came time to resolve the novel at the end, the I
    Ching didn’t know what to do. It got me through most of
    the book. Everytime they cast a hexagram I actually cast
    four of them and got something and assigned it to them
    and they proceeded on the basis of the advice given.
    Like when Juliana Frink decides to tell Abendsen that
    he’s about to be offed by an agent. I threw the coins
    and she got warning make known the truth to the court
    of the King great danger and so on. Someone comes up
    behind him and hits him with a club. That’s what she got.
    And so she did go warn Abendsen and if she’d got another
    hexagram I would not have had her go speak to Abendsen.
    But then when it came time to close down the novel the I
    Ching had no more to say. And so there’s no real ending
    on it. I like to regard it as an open ending. It will
    segue into a sequel sometime.

    Mike: When you find somebody with the stomach to write one.

    Phil: Yeah, or if the I Ching ever gets off its ass.

    Mike: Do you go back from time to time and throw it to
    see if there is an ending to it or —

    Phil: No, I don’t use the I Ching anymore. I’ll tell ya,
    the I Ching told me more lies than anybody else I’ve ever
    known. The I Ching has a personality and it’s very devious
    and very treacherous. And it feeds ya just what you want
    to hear. And it’s really spaced out and burned out more
    people than I would care to name. Like a friend is somebody
    who doesn’t tell you what you want to hear. A friend tells
    you what’s true. A toady is the old word for somebody who
    told you what you wanted to hear. The Kings all had their
    toadies around them who told them what they wanted to hear.
    The King said, am I the greatest King in the world? Yeah,
    you’re the greatest King in the world, yeah. Well, this is
    what the I Ching does. It tells you what you want to hear
    and it’s not a true friend. One time I really zapped it.
    I asked it if it was the devil. And it said yes. And then
    I asked it if it spoke for God, and it said no. It said I
    am a complete liar. I mean that was the interpretation. In
    other words I set it up. I set it up. I asked two questions
    simultaneously and it said I speak with forked tongue, is
    what it said. And then it said, oops, I didn’t mean to say
    that. But it had already -

    In the end, helpers who desire further followup will post it.

    Note.

    [1] <https://www.yeschat.ai/gpts-ZxWyZYqh-Wisdom-of-the-I-Ching>

    [2] How can the wisdom of the I Ching start the I Ching monologue in my
    usenet followup?

    [3] What would wise I Ching say next after a start?

    [4] <https://philipdick.com/literary-criticism/interviews/hour-25-a-talk-with-philip-k-dick/>

    Danke,

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    When I used the I-Ching in the 1900s and 1970s it told me what
    I already knew.

    bliss

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