• Re: Moon Water Dance ~~Faraway Star

    From George J. Dance@21:1/5 to NancyGene on Tue Jun 10 17:23:39 2025
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    On Mon, 9 Jun 2025 19:22:12 +0000, NancyGene wrote:

    On Mon, 9 Jun 2025 17:03:37 +0000, Will-Dockery wrote:

    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    ~~Faraway Star


    One of the best Zod poems.


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=661057009#661057009

    "One of the best Zod poems" is not saying much, since all of his poems
    are terrible. We rarely speak ill of the dead

    Why do you lie so much, NastyGoon? You love to speak ill of the dead,
    since they can't respond to you.

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  • From Cujo DeSockpuppet@21:1/5 to NancyGene on Tue Jun 10 22:39:39 2025
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    [email protected] (NancyGene) wrote in news:[email protected]:

    On Tue, 10 Jun 2025 19:52:32 +0000, HarryLime wrote:

    George J. Dance wrote:
    On Mon, 9 Jun 2025 19:22:12 +0000, NancyGene wrote:


    On Mon, 9 Jun 2025 17:03:37 +0000, Will-Dockery wrote:

    Moon Water Dance

    Negativity of the past
    taints my future.
    Implanted between
    the buttons.

    Oh, Fate
    bring me answers.
    To the questions
    I cannot bear to ask.

    Enchanted time
    sitting on a bank of sand.
    Aquatic energy flows
    millions of gallons moving.

    To my eyes
    from the night sky.
    I watch the Moon dance
    over Venus.

    ~~Faraway Star


    One of the best Zod poems.


    This is a response to the post seen at:
    http://www.jlaforums.com/viewtopic.php?p=661057009#661057009

    "One of the best Zod poems" is not saying much, since all of his
    poems are terrible. We rarely speak ill of the dead



    Why do you lie so much, NastyGoon? You love to speak ill of the
    dead, since they can't respond to you.



    So you admit that Stinky G is R.I.P.

    That's great news!

    So Dreckweasel lied about talking to the drunk on the telephone?

    I'm shocked.

    --
    "Post-editing someone's statement before replying to it is a sure sign
    that you have already lost the argument." - Little Willie Douchebag gets another asskicking from Pendragon.

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