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Le 22/05/2022 à 23:50, Jean-Pierre Giraud a écrit :

Bonjour,
Ce fichier a été assez profondément remanié, en voici une traduction.
Je ne joins pas le diff qui serait assez peu utile (il y a pas mal de déplacements de tronçon de texte) mais plutôt l'ancienne version de
2020 (vcs_v0.wml). Merci d'avance pour vos relectures.
Amicalement,
jipege

Bonjour,

Quelques détails et suggestions

Amicalement

Lucien

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Bonjour,
une virgule excessive, de m�me la r�p�tition des "des" pourrait �tre ommise,
amicalement,
bubu
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Les privilèges de mises à jour sont accordés à tous ceux qui désirent participer
-à l’écriture des manuels, des, FAQ, des guides pratiques, etc. Nous demandons
+à l’écriture des manuels, des FAQ, des guides pratiques, etc. Nous demandons
habituellement que vous ayez d’abord présenté quelques correctifs utiles. Après
cela, suivez ces étapes pour demander l'accès en écriture :


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