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  • Re: boot-installer accessability: edit in installation-guide

    From Samuel Thibault@21:1/5 to All on Sun Dec 26 12:00:01 2021
    Hello,

    Holger Wansing, le dim. 26 déc. 2021 11:39:44 +0100, a ecrit:
    I would like to recommend some proofreading for your latest installation-guide
    commit.

    Thanks for proofreading :)

    I have added some formatting tags (like <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>) for the keystrokes

    They are already in the common entity, see

    build/entities/common.ent:<!ENTITY enterkey "<keycap>Enter</keycap>">

    I have integrated the other fixes, thanks!

    Samuel

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  • From Holger Wansing@21:1/5 to All on Sun Dec 26 11:50:01 2021
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    Hi Samuel,

    I would like to recommend some proofreading for your latest installation-guide commit.

    I have added some formatting tags (like <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>) for the keystrokes and some other minor things (like avoiding the three-times use of "just" in one sentence).

    A diff is attached.


    I can also push it, if you want.


    Regards + Merry Christmas to you and your family!


    Holger



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    diff --git a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
    index 6a305e95e..eab89cdd0 100644
    --- a/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
    +++ b/en/boot-installer/accessibility.xml
    @@ -35,20 +35,22 @@ boxes. The choice can be made at the boot prompt, see the documentation for
    </para><para>

    With the <userinput>newt</userinput> front-end (used mostly with braille), one -mostly just selects answers with arrow keys, and one presses &enterkey; to -validate the choice. Pressing &tabkey; and &shiftkey; - &tabkey; allows to -switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the
    -<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button with brings back again to previous +mostly just selects answers with arrow keys and presses <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>
    +to validate the choice. Pressing <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap> or +<keycombo><keycap>&shiftkey;</keycap> <keycap>&tabkey;</keycap></keycombo> +allows to switch between dialog elements, and notably to access the +<userinput>Go Back</userinput> button, which brings back again to previous
    questions. Some dialogs contain check boxes, which can be ticked on and off b
  • From Holger Wansing@21:1/5 to Samuel Thibault on Sun Dec 26 14:10:01 2021
    Hi,

    Samuel Thibault <[email protected]> wrote (Sun, 26 Dec 2021 11:55:22 +0100):
    Hello,

    Holger Wansing, le dim. 26 d�c. 2021 11:39:44 +0100, a ecrit:
    I would like to recommend some proofreading for your latest installation-guide
    commit.

    Thanks for proofreading :)

    I have added some formatting tags (like <keycap>&enterkey;</keycap>) for the
    keystrokes

    They are already in the common entity, see

    build/entities/common.ent:<!ENTITY enterkey "<keycap>Enter</keycap>">

    I see.

    I still wonder, if it's correct to format a combination of keys as
    "<key_1> - <key_2>"?

    From my memory I thought we have a format like "<key_1>+<key_2>" for that?
    (the plus sign as an incarnation of what to do: press both keys at the same time)


    Holger




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  • From Samuel Thibault@21:1/5 to All on Sun Dec 26 18:50:01 2021
    Holger Wansing, le dim. 26 déc. 2021 14:07:37 +0100, a ecrit:
    I still wonder, if it's correct to format a combination of keys as
    "<key_1> - <key_2>"?

    From my memory I thought we have a format like "<key_1>+<key_2>" for that? (the plus sign as an incarnation of what to do: press both keys at the same time)

    I don't know what would be best, feel free to amend :)

    Samuel

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